Friday, October 22, 2010

A Ray Of Hope!

I have always been very fascinated by the power of the pen. When you write,you must quail at nothing,and let the words pour straight from the bottom of your heart, all the feelings and emotions are then converted to words, which always express! I have always found it easier to express myself with words,as writing gives me an opportunity to cogitate over the happenings in my life,and how I faced them.
I never believed that I could write poems,until I did start writing them in 12th standard. That was a period of great stress for me,as I had seemingly endless exams to appear,and was reasonably prepared for none. The exigency was to study,but I couldn't fathom anything given in my books.I was sad,deeply disappointed, and millions of emotions were boiling inside me! I spared some time and wrote a few poems, in an attempt to console myself, all of them reflected grief and frustration. After the turmoil (exams) were over, I wrote this poem, a Ray of Hope! Which provided me the much needed motivation to face the future problems. Life has been really good ever since. So here's the poem.


Whenever I'm been drowned in a stressful stream,
I feel really panicked,unable to scream,
The worries and anger hold my breath,
and all that is visible is a dreadful death.
When the refulgent gleam fades,
as the day is won over by night,
your face appears before my sight,
a ray of hope, scintillating! Bright!


It gives me the power,
to withstand the pain,
and all my lost strength,
I then regain,
it then seems fun,
to confront my worry,
which then becomes easier,
and is done in a hurry!


Agonies then fail,
and the mind becomes calm,
I see the throes grow pale,
like the colour of my palm.


The ray of hope,
is an endless rope,
which pulls me out of all my stress,
It gives me succour,
to overcome the throes,
and ends all the piled up distress.


When the clouds of stress,
drench my core,
the ray of hope parches me,
and opens a novel door.


The ray of hope,
comes in time of need,
and never obliges to any of my greed,
it chooses for me,
the best path to lead,
and invigorates the growth,
of a righteous deed!

4 comments:

  1. Wow. I am impressed to no end. Seriously. The poem is amazing. I never knew you could write so well and I mean not just the poem, the intro which you wrote was very good too.

    I'll wait for your next post.

    P.S: Do try to enable a RSS feed on the blog, will make it easier for me to follow it.

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  2. thnx bro.. am flattened by ur comment.. :)
    Ya i'll enable a RSS feed on the blog.. :)

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  3. okay, Mihir, 1.) whats an RSS feed?
    2.) ur poem is really well written-the similes, the metaphors are really good
    3.) do u use a thesaurus while writing this blog? seems to me some words are straight off the thesaurus-no offence-you have the skill to write!

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  4. 1) it's like a reader,whch'll send u updates If i update my blog.
    2) thnx! I like it... :)
    3) hahahahahhahaha! no man! these words come in a flow! :)

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